2009-05-21

LILT: Du Hast 1.2

You
You have
You have me
You have me today
You have me today but I might not stay

Do you vow, till death do you part
To be faithful with all your heart

No

Do you vow, when her you do part
To love her when things get too hard

No


[lyrics][discuss]

I still like the bastardisation from 1.1, so I'm just working on that further. I feel no real imperative to go in the precise direction of Till's words. Just so long as the implications are similar I think it works.

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