2009-05-10

LILT: Rein Raus 3.0

I am the rider
You are my mount
When I'm on you
Your fate is bound
You moan
I soothe you
But the beast rampages through

Rein Raus

I am the hunter
You are my prey
I had you running
Now you're at bay
You hit the wall
I go straight through
And all is right when I open you

Rein Raus

Deeper, deeper
Shout it! Shout it loud!
Deeper, deeper
I'm pounding through and hit your core
And all the savage beasts start to roar

I'm done with you
You're now free
I dismount
I have to leave
Others wait that I must run
All're in my ceaseless hunt

Rein Raus

Rein (deeper)
Raus (deeper)


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This is the first draft where I feel like I might be finished...

[update 20090510 1545hrs: I've re-versioned this, as it's hit a level where I'm feeling differently about it. It's gone from being 2.3 to 3.0.]

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