LILT: Liebe ist für Alle da 1.1

After listening to this song for a fair while (more than two months) and having ambivalent feelings toward it I have, in just the past few hours of really wearing it, come to love it. Mad. Here's the second draft:

Warm, clear water
Bodies divine
See how they gleam
In the sunshine
I creep near
Sweet words ready
He who'd fuck
Must be friendly

There is love for everyone
There is love for everyone
There is love for everyone

So when I close my eyes
It's her I see
I lock her away in my fantasy
So when I close my eyes
She doesn't flee
There is love for everyone
Not for me

Warm, clear water
Bodies divine
Not for me
It's elusive
The finest form
Lithe and slim
Pouting mouth
And such brown skin

There is love for everyone
There is love for everyone
This love is there for everyone
Even me

So when I close my eyes
It's her I see
I lock her away in my fantasy
So when I close my eyes
She doesn't flee
There is love for everyone
Not for me

So when I close my eyes
Just her and me
I hold her tight
And no one can see her weep
She closes her eyes too
She doesn't flee
There is love for everyone
Even me

There is love for everyone
There is love for everyone
This love is there for everyone
Even me

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